Posts Tagged ‘Writing’

So THERE, Chaos! Take THAT!

Sunday, April 21st, 2013

by Doranna

Last week I wrote a lamentful blog about my April 20 deadline for finishing first draft of LYNX REVEALED.  You know…some chatter about deadlines, some chatter about unexpected CEs, some whining from the muse…

It was a stiff deadline and I needed to prove to myself that I could make it after several years of life transitions that turned my writing routines all murky, if ever ongoing.  But hitting homestretch in the story with the addition of several hours of work per day on the CEs, and…

Well.  I was sad.

Also, there’s always someone here at the office standing station with his insistent little Beagle feet against my leg, clamoring for attention.  He’s always done this, but he also misses Belle.

"Training time!  Train the Beagle!"

“Training time! Train the Beagle!”

“Train the Beagle NOW.”

Well, here I am to tell you that HA HA HA!  Friday morning, I wrapped up that first draft ANYWAY!  And yes!  I’m using lots of ALL CAPS!

Because I DID IT!

Take THAT, Chaos!

Done!  Done done donedone!

Done! Done done donedone!

Not only done, but darn close to target!  (80-85K words for the Nocturne line.  And I know I’ll be adding about 500 in a missing scenelett, and will tighten down a bit in second draft, when I won’t generally do much but refine the words on paper and slide through the story with defining tweaks to the various threads of it.)

The close-up.  Strike a pose!

The close-up. Strike a pose!

 

Of course, here I am two days later and the Muse is missing her first draft time rather badly, in spite of a full weekend of doggy and family events.  But she’ll have to suck it up; there’s a week or more before I go back to the story with second draft.  On Monday, I start right in on the proofs for CLAIMED BY THE DEMON, while simultaneously working CEs on the new edition of SCENT OF DANGER.  Plus, the cover–!

And also this coming week, Big Things in the Offing for the Dogs.  But that’s another blog.  This one is all about BEING DONE.

Do the dance, Numfar!

The Newsiest News

Saturday, March 9th, 2013

This is Doranna Durgin’s WordPlay Blog. I’m glad you’re here–whether it’s to learn more about my books, or chat about dogs, horses, and reading. On Fridays, The Write Horse usually stops by for life with horse training, written by Patty Wilber.

If you’d like to reach my Webstead, you can clicky on that link you just passed. Right there. Behind you! The one that said Webstead.


 

The Next Big Thing

Wednesday, December 12th, 2012

by Doranna

My friend Julie Czerneda tagged me for this blog meme–she’s already done hers, and you can find it at that link.

1. What is the working title of your next book?

Reckoner RedeemedAm I supposed to have a single answer for this?  I’m working on the backlist production of the Changespell Saga–that’s what’ll hit the “shelves” first.  And I’m preparing to write LYNX REVEALED, the next Nocturne Sentinels title.  And TAMING THE DEMON is the next frontlist title to hit the shelves (another Nocturne, in the new Demon Blade series).

But my big new exciting thing at the moment is the original (and probably author-released) third book in the Reckoners series, RECKONER REDEEMED.  I’m trying to decide whether to do a Kickstarter for it (which will have a huge effect on its length)–but I need a certain amount of material on hand before I make the decision, and that’s what I’m working on now.

(You see?  I already made the cover for it.  Because that’s the way my muse works.)

2. Where did the idea come from for the book?

Books 1 & 2 in the series?  No, that’s the smarty pants answer.

The Reckoner Series was an idea I kicked around for several years.  I wanted a little bit Buffy, a little bit Scooby Doo, a little bit Ghostbusters (Garrie, our reckoner), and a whole lotta Trevarr (our hero).  Heh heh heh.  Sklayne built himself from whole cloth, and knew who he was the moment I started typing his first scene, so I’m not sure I can take credit for him.

I was targeting paranormal romance–since that’s where I’m active right now with the Nocturnes–but I really saw this as a chance to shift a little close to my fantasy genre roots.

This book in particular was pretty much ordained.  I pitched the series as a threesome, and Tor picked up the first two (THE RECKONERS, STORM OF RECKONING).  The first book was released on the day that Amazon removed the buy button from all Macmillan books, and that…

Well.  Was that.

So I wrote STORM not knowing if Tor would pick up #3, and I wrote it true to the outline/proposal…and that story definitely needs to be finished.  For all of us!  I also have the rights back to THE RECKONERS, so will be putting out an author cut of that one.  (To meet production needs, I had to cut about 30K words from that book, and I think it’ll benefit if it gets some of them back.)  STORM OF RECKONING is still available, however.

3. What genre does your book fall under?

Paranormal romance, with a robust cast of characters and the evidence of my fantasy genre roots.

4. What actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?

How to choose?

5. What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

Buffy meets interdimensional Ghostbusters.

6. Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?

I’m not entirely sure yet.  That is, the first two books were repped and published by Tor Paranormal Romance.  This third book may go out under my Blue Hound Visions imprint, or it may go through The Knight Agency digital assistance program.  It won’t be a publisher book, however.  This is for me and Reckoners readers, and for my muse.  I promised her we would do this.

7. How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?

Dunno yet!  It’ll be written as I can buy time for it (one reason I’m considering the Kickstarter), and will probably grab moments between the scheduled Nocturnes.  It should be about 4 months total, when all is said and done.  Depends on the length, too, which depends on whether I do the Kickstarter thing…

8. What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

Um?

Sometimes I think readers are best positioned to answer that question.  So if anyone has a clue–based on the first two books–I’m  all ears (eyes).  It’s a book with dry humor, a lot of attitude, and a lot of sly heart.

9. Who or what inspired you to write this book?

I couldn’t not?

10. What else about the book might pique the reader’s interest?

It is, as are all my books, about people coping with change and emotion–about learning who they are, by how they deal with what happens in their lives.  This means I get to make things happen in their lives, oh yes I do.

In this case, there are a number of elements I haven’t played with before.  Trevarr’s world is pretty dark, and that was fun to play with–while giving him a lot to learn about Garrie’s world.  Sklayne was the most fun, I think–both powerful and naive, shackled and uncontrollable.  I love him to pieces.  8)

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Thanks, Julie, for the chance to play with this blog meme!  And what do you guys think?  Kickstarter yes?  Kickstarter no?  Just shut up and write?

 

 

 

Dear Amazon Authors Whose Books I Reviewed

Monday, October 29th, 2012

by Doranna

The very nice thing about taking the blog off the M/W schedule is that if I feel like posting something oddball, I can.

Like this. No doggie pics, no videos, just a bit of cold wrath.

It goes like so:

Dear Amazon Authors Whose Books I Reviewed:

I’m sorry that Amazon is removing all my reviews.  Authors, it turns out, are no longer welcome or allowed to review at Amazon.  Retroactively.

No matter that some of us did it very, very rarely–or that our handful of reviews look skewed to the high stars only because we don’t post reviews for books that come in any lower on the scale.  These are our peers; if we don’t like a book, we prefer not to say so.

On the one hand I understand why this is happening.  Those authors who paid for reviews, those authors who run amok dissing other books to damage the competition, those authors who review their own books…

Well, people like this are why we can’t have nice things.

I don’t happen to think disenfranchising everyone who ever wrote a book is the way to deal with the situation.

I also think that while this will prevent every author who also happens to be a reader from expressing delight with the books they love, it won’t stop the stupid people from behaving badly.

They’ll find another way to behave badly.  Trust me.

So I’m sorry my reviews aren’t there to support your books any longer.  I’m sorry that if you happened to love and review one of my books, those reviews are gone, too.  I was honored to have them.

DuncanHorse on the Run, with Mad

Monday, October 22nd, 2012

by Doranna

Things are starting to pick up in DuncanHorse World.  But first, a random bit of goodness:

Tiger Bound

Tiger Bound from England!

 

It’s an overseas version of Tiger Bound!  How cool is that?  I’m supposed to get copies of all international versions and I usually do (I have a small batch of foreign language books here that I admire every now and then), but this set came pretty promptly on the heels of the US version.  Neat!

Ahem.  So back to the big white pony, who is still dealing with flares from his severe reaction to the spring shots (which he’ll likely never get again, aside from tetanus).  A week or so ago I ordered him some $$$TransferFactor$$$, since my consulting vet has seen it work wonders for situations like his.  I wouldn’t know yet…they don’t seem to be in any great hurry to send it.

HURRY UP, PEOPLE!  Duncan and I are waiting.

Consulting Vet is ConneryBeagle’s chiropractic vet, and we’ve had some helpful casual conversations about Duncan’s situation over the summer.  I decided to make it official so I could really grill her (without friend-guilt!), so here we are.

Last week Consulting Vet also came by to poke around his furry white sides, chat about his diet, and ponder how to best manage the ongoing symptoms.  Duncan was sleepy in the sun in his early winter coat, and so willingly gave blood, schmoozed, and let himself be admired.

The blood work is just to eliminate certain concerns, after which we’re likely to do what I’ve been doing all summer–daily reality checks for the three subtle signs that he’s at the front edge of a flare, and tossing dexamethasone at him if I find anything.  It only seems to occur every couple of weeks–the heat seems to be a problem, so maybe winter will help, too–and at those doses, the steroids aren’t a big issue (barring ugly results on the blood work–I hope to know something this week).

Meanwhile, we’ve had some brisk mornings, and he does seem to be feeling a little better, yes he does.  But if a picture is worth a thousand words, a video…even better! Although I’m just now realizing that all the captions I put in the dark area in the video editor do not show up in the YouTube conversion. Oh, for pete’s sake..

(Don’t you wish you had that kind of energy?)

 

Book Goodies Time!

Wednesday, October 17th, 2012

by Doranna

New covers!  Whee!  New books available as Try-Me freebies.  More whee!  October newsletter!  Wuh, wuh, wuh!

*peeks to see if anyone buys the perky factor*

Oh, bother.  Cheerleading was never my strength.  But it’s all cool, and it’s all in the newsletter, and it’s not a big deal to get your hands on it.  All you have to do is CLICKIE HERE.

And if you want the newsletter in your mailbox, all you have to do is CLICKIE OVER THERE where it says “Subscribe to my Newsletter.”  (I know it’s subtle, but I have faith that you call can find it!)

Look!  This is what it looks like!  But none of the clickies are live.  You have to CLICKIE HERE for that.

 

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I am a Flake!

Monday, October 1st, 2012

by Doranna

No, not THAT kind of flake.

Well, I guess…yes, that kind of flake.  Sometimes.  But that’s not what I’m talking about this time.  I’m talking about software for writers.

Because what’s better than finding software that gives you an excuse to procrastinate wallow, develop, and otherwise play with the story?

Actually, I’ve never gotten into the whole “build your book” software thing.  Or before that, the endless systems advised for same.  Oh, you know.  The index cards, the character interviews, the systems, and the navel-gazing, self-important, overly righteous exercises by which one is supposed to build a book.

(“Gosh, Doranna, tell us how you really feel!”)

And every time someone suggested such things, whether they came by way of book, seminar, or software, my muse made a retching noise and slammed the door between us.  After all, she’s been writing books since she was twelve, a native pantser who learned to plan ahead by about a third of a book at a time while holding the entire big picture in her (MY) head.

Well, a retching muse is hard to ignore.  (I want you to know I looked for a graphic for this spot, but had a sudden attack of class.)  And since writing as a pro also means coming up with proposals, which means coming up with detailed synopses, I just did it her way–which is to say, lots of hand-waving.  “So there’s this cool set-up, and then [hand-waving] something cool happens that raises the stakes!  And then [hand-waving] another something cool happens that raises the stakes even more!”

I always knew what I wanted to accomplish at any given point in the story, but I never knew quite how it would happen or what threads would be weaving through what point of the book.  And that works for me, but still…

I do like to be organized.  And I like to wallow and play in the worlds of my mind; I just generally do it without writing anything down.

In recent years I’ve stumbled through a lot of non-bloatware software.  There was the one that had a Save File” bug (unannounced) that ATE MY CHAPTER.  There was this other one that was waaaaay too complicated (see above, navel-gazing) and looked like nothing more than a great big fat excuse to Never Write Again.  There was one that was close, but not quite flexible enough.  There’s Scrivener, which I’m actually using for first draft, but have found the compile feature to be a major-league PITA/FAIL and the backups to create a dizzying number of hard-to-access folders and files, so I don’t like to do anything but the most primary and simplest work that way.  There are features I love and I’ve written 18 months of fiction on it, so it’ll likely stay my drafting software.  But.

snowflakeI don’t even remember how I came across Snowflake, by Randy Ingermanson.  I was following my nose in the search for drafting software, and stumbled onto it.

Muse: OMG.  OMG.  This is IT!  This is how I think!  GET IT FOR ME!  GET IT GET IT GETITRIGHTNOW!

So I did.

And lo, it has changed much about the way I develop books.  Even if I don’t put a story or book through the system, I have it in mind as I’m pulling the story elements together, and it gives me direction.  And confidence.  And besides, it’s FUN.

The Snowflake system is called that because like snowflakes, its story-building process is fractal–not linear.  It starts with the very basic one-sentence summary of your story–the simplest level of complexity–and adds layers.  And it’s totally flexible–you can skip steps that don’t work for you, and the whole process still works just fine.  Or you can mutate the steps slightly to suit your needs, which I’ve done from the start.  I also recently started treating story threads as characters–that’s where it fits in the system–and that works juuuust fine.

Anyway.  I can well imagine that this system wouldn’t work for everyone (shoot, just look how many approaches not only didn’t work for me, but were actively antithetical to the way I work).  And it’s not a system that will teach you how to write–you have to know how to tell a story going into the thing. In fact, most of the criticism I see about the method is aimed at the fact that while it does create a plot, it won’t automatically result in storytelling.

Well, no.  Not much does, does it?  There aren’t any shortcuts for that.  You have to put the story into the planning your ownself.  So far I haven’t had any trouble doing that with this method.  It’s all in the way you expand from sentence to paragraph to synopsis–which, except for short pieces, is as far as I go.  If you want, you can write scene to scene, but that’s not for me.  Doesn’t matter, though–after all, the tool is there for me to use–I’m not there for the tool to use!

Muse: No one is the boss of me!

Yeah, yeah.

There’s a really good description of the process here, and here’s how someone else felt about it–but it takes me a heck of a lot less time to go through the process than is posited in these discussions. A tenth of the time, maybe?  A fifteenth?  Maybe because I don’t get stuck on the final step with the scenes, or maybe because I have a pretty solid thing of my own going already.  Here’s another conversation about it–this echoes my experience a little more closely, except the part about getting bogged down.

In fact, this is a process that un-bogs me, should I be floundering a bit.  That’s the whole point.  But I think it’s necessary to have a sense of when you’re doing the exercise in a truly constructive way and when you start doing it for the sake of doing the exercise.

Anyway, I’m currently snowflaking the third Reckoners book and having a blast.  I’m happy, the muse is happy…what’s not to love?

Or do you have a different book development software/process that makes this one inspire your muse to slam the door?

A Bear and his Cover

Wednesday, September 26th, 2012

Every once in a while, publishers tell authors what’s going on.

Things like shifting publishing dates, changing word count expectations, and radically changed deadlines.

But not usually.

So I wasn’t really surprised when I was bopping around B&N the other day and I ran into the cover for Kodiak Chained (December release), even though I’d never seen it before, had no idea it was out, and would have gladly shared my glee over it had I known.

On the other hand, that’s the kind of surprise I don’t mind getting.  Because, look!  It’s Ruger!  And look!  Isn’t his bear self just awesome? (I think his human self pretty much stands without comment.  Maybe a moment of appreciative silence?)

It’s interesting to see what they did with the blurb, too…it’s like being on the outside of the book looking in…

Kodiak ChainedOne mission. One night. One costly misstep….

Don’t miss this scintillating romance from Doranna Durgin! [note:  that's me!  Scintillating!  wow!]

A mighty Kodiak shifter, Ruger is more than a Sentinel warrior. As a Healer, he willingly risks everything defending the sick and helpless. But after an ambush nearly kills him, he can do only so much-until a sensual lady black bear shifter arrives to provide him backup….

In human form, she is called Mariska. Feisty and self-assured, she has finagled her present assignment helping Ruger chase down a rising new threat. The moment Mariska scents the heroic, battle-scarred grizzly she knows he will be her only weakness…and greatest desire.

Mariska will do anything to aid Ruger-even if confronting the enemy puts everything she holds dear in jeopardy.

Ahhh, impending book release!  Can’t wait!

I hope you’ve had some good surprises lately, too!

 

 

 

Got Goodies?

Monday, August 20th, 2012

“Goodies” in this case means “all the cool news and friend freebies” from my August newsletter.

I can’t reproduce the whole thing here or include the clickies, but if you like the idea of being up-to-date with book news and if you think it’s nice to have a smattering of pointers to author “Try Me” free backlist promos, then you should follow the link to the latest newsletter.

What the heck, maybe you should clickie on the link to sign up for the newsletter!

Either way, here’s the teaser graphic!

(And here’s the link to the live version again!)

Having ALL the Funs

Wednesday, August 8th, 2012

Yes, it is I.  The one who took all the Funs for the day.

Oh the guilt.

Well, it’s all about the muse, as usual.  Because this summer I indulged, and I went back to the world of veterinarian Dale Kinsall and his Sully Beagle.

I always have to say this: I started this series before I had ConneryBeagle, and certainly before I had TWO Beagles.  It went through more publisher foolery than I even want to think about, and finally found a home at Five Star and WorldWide Mystery (and now with FoxAcre Press).  By that time, my ponderings of “should I get a Beagle?” had come to fruition.

But Sully isn’t Connery, and he isn’t Dart–no matter how many times I pose them for cover shots.  He is simply BEAGLE.

Anyway, Nose for Trouble just came out, and Scent of Danger will be available again before the end of the year.  And in the meantime, suddenly…novella!

Tracking Murder is an interim piece–one that fits nicely between Books 2 (Scent of Danger) and 3 (um, not yet written).  But in the meantime, it stands deliciously on its own–so if you’re looking for an introduction to the series, it does that, too.

(And yes, it’s listed at Backlist eBooks, with ALL the retail links…at this clickie…right here…clickie clickie clickie)

About those FUNS?

It’s Dale!

It’s Sully!

It’s Dale & Laura!

It’s tracking! It’s tracking in a spot I love!

It’s Dart Beagle on the cover!  It’s the actual location on the cover!

It makes me want more, more, MORE! of Dale & Sully!

I can see that exclamation points will be in short supply after this blog.

So yes.  I have taken ALL the funs for the day.  But I’m not totally selfish.  Because the whole point of writing fiction is to share it.  At least, that’s the point for me.  The more sharing, the more funs.

Don’t you think?